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Sparrisen
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« on: March 17, 2009, 23:29:23 PM »

Ya. Wweel, I've just done a helluvalot of math and are currently kinda whacked! Just so you know.

Erm, hesitated a bit to make this thread, but you know, I want people's dreams and such in pure for in the other, because it's nice. And this isn't COMMENTS as such. To JUDGE anothers dream is pure FOLLY. But there might be things I'm curious about, and just want to know your thoughts on. Firstly:

1: Writing your vision, for me, it'd be more interesting if I see an "I" somewhere. Like "This is the world" And "This is my relation to the world". Not a must in anyway, but adding an *I* somewhere would be more interesting (for me).

2: Bernie. In your world, people actualize themselves by their actions, but look kinda the same. Therefor, if Charles is a hero and does a lotta cool stuff, people who know him knows this.

But if a new guy comes in, there's NOTHING to differentiate Charles from the rest, so he can't know charles is a good guy by any clue from his apperance?
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« Reply #1 on: March 18, 2009, 07:38:24 AM »

2: Bernie. In your world, people actualize themselves by their actions, but look kinda the same. Therefor, if Charles is a hero and does a lotta cool stuff, people who know him knows this.

But if a new guy comes in, there's NOTHING to differentiate Charles from the rest, so he can't know charles is a good guy by any clue from his apperance?

How can one identify "good guys" by their appearance in real life?

My ideal would be to make everybody a hero.
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